This is an alternate form/update for my SelfMOC, Devax.
Revamp of the Main Story:
Devax was one of several Matoran who never fit in, much like Takua himself. But, unlike Takua, he constantly moved from Agori villages to Matoran villages. He would always make friends but he would eventually leave. He lived a simple, lonely life of a trader and an outcast who nobody truly cared for. Fellow Matoran and the new Agori would normally shun him. The Skrall and the Bonehunters and the remaining Makuta were vanquished, and slowly one by one the Toa Heroes of Mata Nui were turning into Turaga elders of their own respected villages on the new world. One day, Takanuva became a Turaga and, inspired by both Devax and what he himself went through, decided to make a village of his own. A village home to Glatorian Toa, normal Toa, Matoran, and Agori that simply did not fit in, having powers over multiple elements or having multiple characteristics of multiple villages. Most Matoran and Agori fit in perfectly into this new village, but some...not so well. Takanuva started planning something with elder Toa yet to become Turaga. They would use the power of their masks for future ceremonies for these special few "Misfits among Misfits". These ceremonies were made to send these few to new dimensions where they would forget their lives among the beings of their old world and live their lives in new worlds where they can have a new story. Now, during the planning and thinking of the Turaga and Toa, Devax was living the life. He evolved into a Toa along with some other friends of his ((Such as people like Detox and other main SelfMOCs of known Biotubers)). During training as a Toa, he met a guy who would become his rival and brother-at-heart-and-arms. His name was and still is Redox (Of BTD fame). The two, after training, decided to live together in the village.
Their Life After These Events:
Devax was a well known flirt who would basically try to get with any girl he found attractive and was constantly put down and Redox was the best friend who would provide moral support. They lived a simple life as special ops Toa who would be sent after all who would try to bring about a Makuta Uprising, but slowly the ones who would do so would either be dead or captured so they were subjected to being sent to kill savages and beasts. Things got slow...until Devax went out alone on a mission to take out some savage beasts that had been wreaking havoc. He tracked them to a forest and came upon a cave. He walked until he came upon the savages. The beasts were covered in blood, their fur matted with blood. They were all standing around something, growling with....an animal lust. He saw what they were looking at, and he immediately roared with savage anger, his also well known animal rage showing. His eyes glowed white and a black electric aura came around him. He seemingly blacked out as it happened, and he woke up battered and broken in several places but...he was holding someone in his arms. It was an unconscious girl who looked frail and weak, probably in a coma. He cradled her in his arms and he slowly limped several miles to the village. He fell back, unconscious, holding the girl still. He bled horribly from wounds that were reopening. He woke up hours later with bandages on his chest, abdomen, arms, and legs.....and a pissed off looking Redox standing at the foot of his bed with his arms crossed. Devax flipped him off and got up weakly, quickly walking to the village healer's hut. He saw the girl on a bed, still in her coma. He sat in a chair by the bed and slowly took the girl's hand, saying nothing. He stayed that way for days, talking to her as if she were awake, telling his entire story to her...then one day she did and the first thing she did was punch Devax in the face, sending him through a wall and making him lose his grip on her hand. He woke up again, now looking at both a pissed off Redox and the same girl was talking to Devax just as he was when she was asleep. He almost thought of getting revenge but thought better, seeing that the girl was tearing up as she saw his bright green eyes open. He embraced the girl and she embraced him. They held each other for a few moments and then he eventually sat up, looking at Redox. He could tell by the look in Redox's eyes that he was angry and....sad. The girl introduced herself and a rush of stories and memories came to his mind. Her name was Aronna.... ((To be Continued))
*Words from me*
Now that two of my main characters (Devox and Aronna) have been introduced, I'm gonna leave bios for when I have time to make a new basic form for Devax. I will add on to the story once I get to speak more with someone I hope becomes active on here again. Please fave and maybe even give me tips on how to make this guy better. Now goodnight all because it is currently extremely late where I am.